Jeff! A redo and a newdo. Nice! I think that this is a cool entry, one of the coolest from out of your camp. I’d make the grill marks taper off, but you get the point with this rendering. Well done.
And this new piece is cool too. Not sure if you played off the previous Australian entry but I like it. It reminds me of the style of the Old Boston Whalers logo. While the AF is a stronger mark as-is. The ardvark has potnetial. Maybe it shouldn’t be an ardvark, maybe it should be an elephant, kind starting to look like one right? Or mabe it’s just the green and yellow colorway reminds me of the A’s. I say turn this into an elephant and you have yourself a winner. Keep it blocky. Great thinking, this is an ambitious style for anyone to attempt. I think you can make it work.
Slavo! More Aussie love. I think this is a good redo, I still want to see those ears longer, everything else is perfect. Can you get that to us by the end of the week?
Ryan! Again those alternate marks are the jam. That saucer on a hat would be great. What can we do to make that saucer more iconic? Baseball dome might be too obvious. What about a ship made out baseball gear? An open glove is the saucer, make the ball bigger. That’s why all the original Star Wars ships are so great, cause they made them out of junk that was just lying around. Great entry!