Tony! You’ve got two takes on the same concept so I’m going to comment on both in one shot. I really like both, for different reasons. I like the retro vibe of the top one and the badassery of the bottom. I think both have a lot of charm to them. I’m going to pick on though, top! Reminds me of a Northwestern Swinging Friar. Awesome work, double one-n-done!
Jeremy! I like the concept and the Met’s logo reference. 3 things- Ditch the blue sparks coming off the top – Make the 2 blues you’re working with more contrasty and give me a capital “N” instead of a “n”. As a design element I like the “n” but it doesn’t read in this complicated situation. You’re demanding too much of your “n”s Jeremy! Cut it out! Great stuff.